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Oh the Rain!



I’m dreaming of his calming face
How close we are becoming in such a short period of time
Feeling his smooth body upon mine
Embellishing the passion
Gazing into his mesmerizing eyes

Boom!

I wake up with a jolt
Roaring and crashing encircle me
Light striking from all directions
I run to my window
Thrash open the blinds
And there it is

The rain

I smile tenderly with my arms spread above me
I laugh to myself

I swing open my bedroom door
And run down the hallway on my tip toes ever to quietly
I squeeze through the sliding door so no one could hear me leave
I run out into the street and lift my face to the sky above me
I close my eyes to let the water sink into my soul
Cool sensations I feel enveloping me
Filling me with empathy and zeal

The clouds...dark and menacing
The rain... a sheet holding me in its embrace
Giving me excited pleasure
I spin and dance and sing with it
By bare feet patting the asphalt with delight
It’s a musical performance filled with contagious merriment

And then
He was there
The guy of my dreams
Walking toward me down the street with a smirk upon his sturdy face
His blond hair matted to his forehead
His built body shinning in the street lights

As our eyes met
My heart began to pound so hard
I ran to him with delighted refinement
I jumped in his arms as he lifted me to the sky
Pulling me down again into his arms
He kissed me gracefully
The rain covering our skin made us move smoothly about one another’s bodies

We then held hands and ran through the town
Splashing in the puddles and gutters
Sliding on the sidewalks
Laughing and dancing filled the night with so much contentment and beauty
Oh the beauty!
Oh the rain!

As the sun rose gradually
The rain singing in the wind sweet lullabies
I bid my love a gracious farewell
With a kiss and hug

I sneak back inside my room
Looked out the window
And watched the morning sun rise
With the crystal rain shining beautifully on the world before me

Oh the rain!
Only precious memories are filled within its wonderment

Oh the rain...

Oh the rain...



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  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    November 22, 2008

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    this is very good! i can imagine the picture the whole time which is rare for me since i have no imagination! lol very good and i remember when i once felt like this! good job!

    {gothic beauty}


  • TabbyCat
    September 7, 2008

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    I see where you got the idea for a contest with a rain option. Yikes...left me a bit hot under the collar!!!! Lovely use of imagery ...i was there, in the moment, caught up in the magic.


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Simply Breathtaking!!!!! You described wonderfullyThank you for taking the time to enter "Do You Truly Love The Rain?" contest.

    Ted E how I would be in the rain with my lady.

    PS: I can't believe there have been no comments on such a great entry until mine.


    • Rain-Shot-Rose
      September 2, 2008
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      thank you so much for awarding me the gold!! i really appreciate it!! and thank you for your comment