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On Be-Cumming

She stands smiling, waiting,
for my touch, attention, kiss.
We will dance tonight, together,
this beauty and i, in tension.
We will go home together,
and i will pleasure her thoroughly,
asking only for her joy,
and nothing really for me.
And maybe, just maybe, she'll see
that i will do whatever is asked of me.

Author notes

simple romantic and erotic, just the way i like it.

A contest entry

sensual, hopeful, and what men should be like?

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  • daviscth silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    LOL. I'd comment, but your AN sums it up quite nicely. Thanks so much for giving me the chance to enjoy this wonderful poem.