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Fluent Wonder

Sky filters my soul
giving way to wide eyes,
wonder and smiles
Joy flowing amidst the stars and the smoke
a glance at happiness,
tickling my fingertips
just in reach, and yet just beyond
Softly grasping peace in mind
I breathe contentment.

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  • AssumingRain
    August 29, 2008
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    cool.i like the flow of this poem.i find it interesting.