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sweltered nights of pleasure's dew

pensive pounces sincerely true

filled firmness soothes heart of blue

screams with passion long overdue

eyes connect that feed her void

too bad her mate is but a droid

 

to gaze upon his body divine

 

left upon thy hopeless vine






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  • thepoetssoul
    September 6, 2008

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    OOooh I really like this short little piece of poetry.Wonderfully written in it's splendid brevity
    Lovely rhyme and imagery within
    "Pensive pounces"very creative
    Thanks for the entry and best of wishes to you.

    Tony