You have left me hanging,
You have gone on changing,
You say you're just better,
To the very letter,
Of your name.
But it's all the same,
To me.
You shouldn't be so proud,
That you fit in the crowd,
There's more to life than you
I will see this all trough,
To the end.
I have all the proof,
You need.
You left me in the dust,
Victim of your deep lust,
Why did you choose to leave,
When I needed reprieve,
From my life?
You can leave me,
Alone.
Author notes
Title's for a contest.
A contest entry
- what makes you a poet? by Lute.
5200 points, ended January 1, 2009, 69 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a really sad and powerful poem. best of luck in the contest!!! -slick99
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Its really saddest and a painful poem.
“Just remember that; every dad has a day”.
No matter; whether it is minor or major but suffering exists in this today’s world.
it was nicely written, and good poem hon. keep it up.
Glenn
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What do you mean by that quote?
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Hmmm. Is there any possibility that a fraction of this was like maybe inspired a little by Cameron?
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