Be careful with me
My heart and my soul
I'm very delicate
Just so you know
I have a rough exterior
I have thorns galore
But look a little closer
I am delicate as a rose petal
I'm not made of matal
Be careful with me
Like the pages of a book
You don't want to tear me
But you still need to look
But beware for if you look too much
You might get a paper cut
Don't read in to deep
This is just me
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Peace filled Poetry in motion ~ Picture Prompted Contest by Stardust-luvr.
2250 points, ended September 6, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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many thoughts delving into ones soul as to how they see themselves and how they feel others should see them as well. rough yet delicate; sharp yet smooth and resiliant. well done on personification and how ppl shouldnt judge us b4 knowing us. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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this is really good Tanna. It's really one of your best.
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thank you.
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