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My One True Love

You are my mighty Man whose words are more then expected in this world of mine loving each word that you say to me puts a smile to my face.

You make me happy and lighten up my day; you are my man for life
My baby, my lover my everything I could ever ask for

I love you lots that it’s just too hard to express how much I really want you right now, being wrapped up your arms where they can comfort me and where I can hear your heart beat with each second that goes by.

Wishing I could be by your side each and every day…

To share our joys together in life, our love and passion for each other in many mysterious ways

Knowing that you’re far away puts a tear to my eye each night as I think of you, but still dreaming of you each night knowing that nothing can go wrong

Baby I love you and I’ll never let you go for as long as you are my man,

You mean the world to me and I wouldn’t want to do anything that will hurt you because I love you too much to care about anything else in this world except you.

My one true love!!!

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This is dedicated to a very special someone..
he knows who he is..

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  • hyper thing
    November 3, 2008
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    Great

    it is a really good poem

  • mz.butter
    October 22, 2008
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    very compassionately written.


  • Lonley Romantic
    October 22, 2008

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    Astounding!!

    This is such a great poem. This really caught my attention quickly. I know what the emotion you have in this write. I feel the same! My favorite part: "You mean the world to me and I wouldn’t want to do anything that will hurt you because I love you too much to care about anything else in this world except you.

    My one true love!!!" Again great write. You are awesome!


  • Flowergirl
    September 28, 2008
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    love this piece it is very well writen and nicely put into words great work keep it up....


  • darell
    September 2, 2008
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    Lovely!

    words can't express the feelings of love
    that's contained in this eloquent piece
    of poetry. I sense the depth of your love
    and passion and it makes me weep.
    I yearn for someone in my life that can
    love with such a profound capacity.
    You're a romantic and affectionate angel
    that I would be honored to have as my lifetime
    lover and friend. This was fabulous!


  • Touched by an Angel
    September 1, 2008

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    Heart melting

    Well, I might say that I haven't read anyones poems for a lonnnng while, and it was very sweet to read yours first. You made all of us to feel how to love a person and mean it. I know how the feel is, and it is wonderful. Thanks for sharing your work. Keep it up girl!!!

    xSx


  • ForeverLoving
    August 29, 2008
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    wow really nice job i like it


  • SilverWolf
    August 29, 2008
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    ohh i love it!
    i relly love it sis its great!

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