A sky that fills with black
even though the sun hits my back
rain that kiss's me gently
when suddenly it stops intensly
seven bright colors spread in a bow
across the sky so everyone will know
to walk upon the forbidden path
and search their dream of wrath
where they all walk freely
bearing their true identiy
showing none less but themselves
dont be afraid to be youselvevs
because at the end of the rainbow
you can be unjudged, not afraid to show
what lye in the dephs of you soul
you can be wild, without cage patroll
at the end of the rainbow,
thats where i want to be
so i can clearly show
what i am, who really is me
Author notes
i dont know if this is exactly what you're looking for but i tried
A contest entry
- At The End Of The Rainbow (Rhyme Only) by passim.
1500 points, ended September 15, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
does this work for the contest?
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I think that you are probably right: the place to find ourselves may be at the end of the rainbow. Well done
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ty i have always thought thtat back when i was little
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It's beautiful baby, reminds me of perfect world.
You are getting better and better at your form!
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thank you i get it from you
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Wow, this was beautiful. I absolutely LOVE that picture. It held so much to it, and portrayed well with the poem. I liked your rhyming in this piece, because it didn't seem forced at all. Incredibly written. Good luck in that contest
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thankyou
and i am glad tht you could tell it was'nt forced, i never force my work if i feel as if i need to force it i just wait to write, anyway thanks, it good to have support. -
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youre very welcome :] i might have to read more of your poems soon
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i would enjoy tht
its always good to have a reader now im curious about your writing i think i'll go read and comment! ♥
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