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Her Bow

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She strikes a mesmerizing chord
upon her celestial strings,
the tangential tones of soothing notes
felt by the sleeping spirit,
it writes an eternal song upon the heart,
each draw of her bow sending its vibrations
across the mind, touching, inflaming,
blessing in a bounty of creative caresses.

For her ageless violin has always played before mortals
that within they might hear the melody of love,
summoning a desire to discover their own serenade
among the beating choirs in life.

By the stars she shines her compositions,
their twinkle stirs with stunning sensations,
until the ears within can dance with inspiration's theme.

Resonating as eloquent ethereal expressions,
felt awakening in one's marrow,
using a kiss of light to beguile into becoming,
a musician who can give the world
the precious gift of their own special harmony.

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  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    A beautifully penned piece written for such a beautiful picture.. You really did such a wonderful job in weaving vivid imagery here.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    Such inspiration felt within the lines of this write! It awakens the spirit to composing music, hearing melodies yet unwritten from within! Amazing verbage and imagination. Outstanding take on the prompt and a wonderful write!


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    a brilliant poem with some great descriptive metaphorick imagery and some great emotions I love stanzas one,three and four good luck in the contest