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Composing A Rainbow World

With banjo strings of blue perched in her shoulder,
painted beneath stars, was the firmament's color

bent elbows as nimble as wind, sparkling with gold,
the sun spent beams like yarn for the world to behold

fingers pricked chord like thistle of a red rose,
forming scented ribbons and flowered bows

hushed like clean linen hung in autumn whispers,
stillness sprang lilac sighs and cat-tail whiskers

clutched palms grasp carpets of envy beneath baby steps,
pampering youthful dreams woven in tomorrow's depth

tangerine blushes, sipped from trees of joy fermented,
intoxicating seeds of true love with forever intended

tear drops ran like mint, from heaven's  rainbow eye,
as she lifted serenity, to all who dare stop by















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  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    Oh I really love this!! the flow and imagery is so very well crafted!! It was a really soft read as well.. Thank you very much for sharing.. You truly made this picture more beautiful.. Best of luck in the contest..


    Angel


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 30, 2008
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    How lovely this is

    You have penned an elegant piece her I loved it


  • csmmoms2
    August 30, 2008
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    Lovely

    Quite striking. Blue and gold, cat-tails, envies and trees. Very nice.


  • Sanshay
    August 28, 2008
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    But can she cause ecstasy with just music? I wonder lol Sanshay


  • poeticcaresses
    August 28, 2008
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    Wow, I have to say this is one of the best I've read so far. Beautifully written. Wonderful imagery

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