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Heavenly Beauty

 


So seductive and beautiful

as she plays her song of life

dancing to the beat of her own tune.

 

Peaceful and serene is she

as she stand there beautifully naked

comfortable in her own skin.

 

A blemished beauty

of ivory skin so smooth

and a soft gentle heart so pure.

 

Play me a beautiful melody

my Victorian angel so sweet

as I lay my head to sleep so sound.

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  • Fire Storm
    September 1, 2008

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    seductively sweet

    such passion spreads from the words you have woven here hon,,beautiful good luck in the contest,,blessings of love,light,laughter and life..Firestorm


  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    Awww this is really wonderful!!I really loved the image that you crafted in this write..Thank you very much for sharing.. You did such a wonderful job!! Best of luck in the contest..


    Angel


  • Haneen277
    August 30, 2008

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    Beautiful write

    the description is wonderful, you portrayed the whole thing in an unusual wy, and that's what is great about being a real poet


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 29, 2008
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    This is an awesome write

    So smooth and with such tenderness I say you have penned this from the heart indeed I love it


  • Xx Emo Teddy xX
    August 28, 2008
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    wow babe..i love it soo much


  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 28, 2008

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    WOW.
    This is absolutely beautiful ! I loved every word. It was so genuine and real. I love how you portrayed that picture in such a gorgeous manner. Wonderfully penned, dear. Keep it up & good luck in that contest ! ♥


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    Great work with this one!
    See! Your muse isn't that far
    gone. Lovely poem my dear!
    Good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826

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