Through pain and anguish,
I have waited for too long
It seems almost unreal
Our eyes met, and my stomach turned
I let you knock down my steal walls
After it was sworn they would infintely stand
Is it silly,
that you take my breath away?
And my heart will race
if your fingertips should touch me
When a smile dances on your lips,
I tremble at your mere beauty
My mouth cannot form words properly
too afraid to speak in stupidity
And I cannot convey
the meaning behind these feelings
but you need not fear,
for in simple truth;
I love you to an irrevocable degree
A contest entry
- the simple truth.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopeless Romantics by N.W. Clerk.
1200 points, ended September 6, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Humm..this is indeed a wonderful expression..especially the last line is just matchless....
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