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Angels In The Lead

We as humans often wonder,
why our children are called home so young.
For to give a gift yet take it away ,
a song never sung.
But God on high he has always known,
of his best angels to be by his side.
To ready heaven far above,
for that one faithful day he arrives.

There will be angels in the lead,
to help all those saved for eternity.
For often we don't see our best before our eyes,
and the faith is the light of our soul he does see by and by.

If we lived as he had foretold would we live forever,
would we never be sick or grow old.
If we blessed him and raised our young the same,
could we hear the violin from the  angels this day.

He is not to be questioned for he knows all,
and when he comes to take our children and loved ones the day he calls.
Heaven is shown upon their face free of pain and strife,
his lead angels on the day of rapture for the everlasting life.





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I Praise him and try everyday to understand his decisions he makes in this world.

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  • Angelflower
    September 1, 2008

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    This was really beautiful.. something that is really vivid and detailed in imagery.. You really did such a wonderful job..thank you very much for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest..

    Angel

  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    a brilliant poem full of some great truth and vivid imagery to make the reader think yes he knows all and is there with his open hands of love good luck in the contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    A wonderful write you have depicted here
    your words speak the truth so much
    again thought provoking
    yes we do try to understand
    Love you
    Julie xx