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The Dragon's Hiss

Fall forth in darkly hushing sounds of night
On wings of dragons threshing, howling winds,
A scream unearthly cries, unheard in fright
The cursing moan, of those who tread out late.
Far from affront is rage unchecked in spades,
So hinders this unknown in fire,
Yet feral dragons circle in flight
As hawks about to feed of every life.

 

Battle hammers rose in just defence

Fall forth in darkly hushing sounds of night

On wings of dragons threshing, howling winds

A scream unearthly cries.

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  • pirate material
    August 31, 2008
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    this poem reminds me of lord of the rings, that constant battle between good and evil, the ultimate moral conflict i spose we all face. I really like the fact with the dragon you feel as if you are watching this battle from above with a superiority, kinda god like i guess, really good poem, creating vivid images in my head

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  • trekkergirl silver member
    August 31, 2008

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    I just love dragons. I love to read about them. I look for artwork about them. Dragons are so very interesting for me to read. And this poem is no different. Good write. Good imagery. Interesting to read. Great job

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  • suseann silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    This as a metaphoric verse reveals for me the strong gusty winds of a Winter's icy cold storm.Howling winds do seem to scream and unnerve in dread.As taken as a fantasy describing the darkness fearful and the shattering frightful scream of a beasty dragon,it conjures many senerios seen.Nice work.