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End Of The Rainbow

Colors lead to unity,
transcending space-time.
Mystical wisdom unravels truth,

masterpiece sublime.

 

One light creates many,

different yet the same.

Streams of color merge,

Return to light, whence it came.

 

At the end is pure divinity,

duality to one.

When heaven rises from within,

where man meets the Son.

 

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  • aboomer silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    This is really lovely! Your wording and images - I much enjoyed!

    Thank you for such a nice entry.
    best wishes in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    I think that this is nice poem I do think that rainbows are a form of peace thanks for sharing goodluck in the contest be well


  • passim silver member
    September 15, 2008
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    This is a beautiful poem. The last line is my favourite. Thank you


  • misshugglebugglez
    September 6, 2008

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    Beautiful, just beautiful! thank you for entering! i just love your vocabulary! "Mystical wisdom unravels truth, masterpiece sublime" was my favorite line. this was dazzling and just wonderful! good luck in your contest! =)


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Such beauty and truth. When man meets the sun the colors of the rainbow reach out from a single white light. It is pure indeed.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    And all returns to pure light.
    A beautiful concept.

    Aren't you a true wonder!!!

    Aesthete


  • Providence
    August 30, 2008

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    The light rises within a rainbow...wonderfully sublime. This seems to lift the reader into the rainbow's arch only to find light!

    Bravo Sweet poet!

    Marianne


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    I have always stood in awe watching a rainbow! Something inside of me letting me know just how special is the sight I was looking at.


  • ourgirlFriday
    August 29, 2008

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    Lovely!

    I think of "Over the Rainbow" everytime I see a poem of this that's yours. I love how you bring it all together in the middle, to the end. Reminds me of LOTR, of Gandalf and Saruman...


  • ShadyLass
    August 28, 2008
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    I agree I want to be at the end of this rainbow. Lovely poem.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    I want to be on that end of the rainbow! I love it all...but especially those last 3 lines! Pam

  • goalsv
    August 28, 2008
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    Wonderful look at the rainbow. A great poem with a spectacular ending.

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    August 28, 2008

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    Hello.

    Fancy finding an entry from you in a rainbow contest, but I am surprised at the rather sombre background and helpful colour contrast, hahahaha. An interesting write, speaks to me like you are writing about coming from Source, interconnectivity, "different yet the same" the Zen's will love that line, hahaha. Oneness and duality (which you said anyway, ahha).

    I think stanza 2 line 4 could be tightened up, and stanza 3 line 2. You could actually use "whence" in stanza 2 line 4, for it means "from which"; 2 cents. I wish you well in the contest.

    My regards.

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