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Treasured Memories!

I bear her mark of love tattooed upon my heart.
Her eyes bring ecstasy and splendor to my soul.
My darling whispers in the night, awakening my need.
I reach for her in a paradise of romance,
yearning her intimate touch.
Visions of yesterday recapture her sweet gentle ways.
Memories of us strolling the pathways of love in love,
as we indulge enchantment in the solitude of forever.
I die daily wanting her next to me.
Her breath heated in passion of flaming desire,
as I express my affections under the intoxication
of a love that was exclusively mine.

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  • LadyLuff
    August 28, 2008
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    nicely done poem
    very sweet indeed


  • Topaze gold member
    August 28, 2008
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    A fine piece crafted in a most passionate way, thank you for your wonderful entry in this contest.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    August 28, 2008

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    oh my gerry miss somebody lol how ever i am kidding this is a very let me pour it all out on the table on how I adore the type of poem here it is very well expressed with the deep depths of romance nice job artist and good luck


  • whos my humblepie
    August 28, 2008

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    Beautiful Darell....

    The kind of sentiment that makes me weep love.
    Wish this could be planted in my heart for eternity.