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Peachy Peach

A plump, juicy
peach, blossoming
nectar over
my lolling and
eager tongue;

Paradise and
divinity!
Oh, so yummy!
I wallow in
sweet pleasure.

A contest entry

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  • Antebellum
    July 5, 2009
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    Thanks so much for entering.

    [if you end up in the finals I will comment better]


  • Shantti silver member
    April 28, 2009

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    OMG. Yes we are coming to peach season.
    I love them myself, and am actually looking forward to making a peach pie with fresh peaches this summer, served warm with vanilla ice cream on top mmmmm mmmmm.....
    Thanks for the tasty treat!


  • wildflower. gold member
    February 1, 2009
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    Judged-ola!

    mmm peaches


  • unavailable
    September 18, 2008
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    So glad you enjoy peaches.


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 10, 2008
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    oooh NICE

    i want a peach now

    i dont even like peaches

    lol

    great job


  • Slick99
    September 7, 2008

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    Peachy Peach

    this is very good and PEACHY!!! LOL. you should enter this in a 'fruit' contest!!! have a nice day, -slick99


  • Unique Utopia
    August 29, 2008
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    very cute

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