RHYME TOWN
A special nightevery hundred years,
little creatures as far as eyeS can see.
Forest full of fairies, gnomes and elves,
headed to the Rhyme Town Jamboree.
Travel far and wide, little ones gather,
in a clearing under spreading maple tree.
In RhymeTown to bond kinship together,
form a pact, all creatures that are wee.
This special night there is happy singing,
little creatures tell of folklore of old.
Gnomes, fairies dance the night away,
trolls dance with pixies, sight to behold.
Lasts tilL moon disappears over mountains,
Papa smurf, tinkerbelle danced all night,
All the Smurfs had wee too much to drink,
blue smurfs turn green, not a pretty sight!
Ugly little trolls had fun in Rhyme Town,
this night all were there to have some fun,
But tomorrow would be a different story,
Mean trolls await, when night is done.
Glow from fireflies look like moonbeams,
shining down on little creature Jamboree,
As sun rises, the night of fun had ended,
little creatures scatter neath maple tree.
In a list
A contest entry
- Rhyme Town by Slick.
675 points, ended September 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Amazing
I can only sum this up in two words
1. cute
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Thank You
Your comment was very nice and appreciated. Thank you for stopping by and reading. Take care. Sandy
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Hun, By the final line in the first stanza I was smiling and by the end I was giggling and throughly enjoying the sweet, cute and quirky flow and imagery of this
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Wonderful Comment!! Hugs and Smiles Amanda.
Thank you for reading.
Always, Sandy
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The rhyme is so well done. movement and flow is always done so grand and smooth. Stanza build in intesity until the end and the reader finds it difficult to stop until the read is complete.
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Very Nice Coment Dan
Thank you for reading mty friend. Glad you enjoyed! Take care.
Sandy
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hey, this is very unique. i've never written about fairies and such before! good luck in my contest! -slick99
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Nice Comment!!!!!
Thank you for the nice coment. So glad you enjoy my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Take care. Sandy
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This is so cute
Gee i wish I were under three again, well i am over five darn it, or is it six. Guess it is which # I want to use. This made my day. I like gnomes- the like me - well at time make no-me sence...mac
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Wonderful Comment
Good Morning Mac. Always so nice when my dear friend reads my poetry. Hope you have a Sunny Day there.
Take care,
God Bless My Friend,
Sandy
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