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Rainbows True

Rainbows are a favorite
I sit and watch them by the hour
They have such lovely colors
Their Arch has so much power

I imagine that I can walk

Atop the brighest blue

Then I jump down to the pink

Their colors are so true

 

I follow them across the sky

To see just where I'll go

It takes forever to do this

I just thought you ought to know

 

Wow, I think I see the end

My eyes are all aglow

For wonders I have never seen

In the loveliest of all Rainbows

 

Well I can't tell you what I saw

It's beauty is beyond compare

You won't be disapointed friend

Don't be afraid to travel there

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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    VERY DELIGHTFUL
    AND CREATIVE
    I LOVE HOW YOU ENDED IT WITH A BIT OF MYSTERY
    GOD BLESS MY FRIEND...


    • Katie Lazette
      September 15, 2008
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      Thank you Pisces rainbow for stopping by to read my poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for arching across my page. Your rainbow shines bright. Katie


  • passim silver member
    September 15, 2008
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    A very peaceful image is wrtten here. Thank you


    • Katie Lazette
      September 15, 2008
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      Thank you passim for stopping by to read my poem. Glad you found it peaceful. Katie


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    No I am not afraid rather enjoyed..and that scenario is seen by the beuty of your words here..just wonderful indeed..


    • Katie Lazette
      August 28, 2008
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      Thank you PrabhuDayal, so pleased that you enjoyed reading my poem. Your comment is greatly appreciated Katie


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 28, 2008

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    Very beautiful and a lovely thought
    for this prompt. Rainbows are such a
    wonderful and intriguing part of our
    universe. They are something that we
    can never seem to take our eyes off.
    Well done my friend and good luck to
    you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826


    • Katie Lazette
      August 28, 2008
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      Thank you Jeremy0826, Glad to hear you also like Rainbows. Aren't they so beautiful. Thanks for reading and commenting. Katie

  • mcheadle
    August 28, 2008
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    I think one day we we will all follow a road like that and

    mony more of pleasure when we make our last lead..mac


    • Katie Lazette
      August 28, 2008
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      gosh mac... I thought I was making the clappy's, but I made hugs. Oh well you deserve a hug or three...Katie

    • Katie Lazette
      August 28, 2008
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      I think you are right mac..and it will be a beautiful road... .. Katie

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