Lost in your own web of manipulation
Meditate yourself some self perception
For you that is the best prescription
Narrow minded hypocrites looking for perfection
Blinded by money- distorted by lies
Drowning in their own lake of corruption
This twisted reality screams, shallow hopeless dreams
Author notes
The chorus and first verse of a song that I am writing. I will add more verses when I have written them.
Please tell me what you think
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Really hard hitting and effective. I thought the quasi-rhyme was really good. I can totally see this as a song.
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Short but powerful
My dear you've penned a bitter reality that we grown ups unfortunately are guilty of... you've spoken of the truth so beautifully that makes us stop and think of our own actions... thanks for showing us our worst nightmare... very well written... short but you hit the bull's eye... thanks for sharing your talent.... take care hun... Minoo
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Very powerful and well written! Great job!
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