Racing mental thoughts
filled with energy
flourishing in magnitude
An afflatus of deepened
inspiration
coloring the mind's palette
Vehement deluges
of overwhelming mentation
with dexterous adeptness
Restless figmentations
of superfluous wisdom
abdicated with finality
Author notes
PROMPT:
Give me some great poems on any subject
Please, Keep them reasonably short
A contest entry
- Anything you wish by thepoetssoul.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful work...you are such a deep thinker with such wonderful usage of words...this is thought provoking and well written...
Excellent!
Best to you!
sis
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The mind is a very powerful source of energy.
And you have weaved this penning together so well.
Splendidly written with vivid imagery.
Oh and great word usage
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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I have to agree with other comments! This is amazing! What a great job on this one! This gets ones mind working especially early in the morning
Love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Oh My Word~
Wonderful weaving of words Beautiful and Love the words: Restless figmentations~
I keep seeing Spirit- not standing still- refusing to be stagnate~ Excellent
Woot
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Fantastic verbiage creating a fluid divergence from reality in the deluge of impressions that roil in an over excited mind. Very well written dear sis, best to you.
Mouser
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