There’s something I can't tell you
You don't need to know
It's so down far inside of me
That I can't let it show
It's hard enough to think
That what I'm thinking might be true
This pain, this love, this hidden mess
Might've started all with you
You smile heartily
You think you know the truth
But look at me
This can't be
It's obvious insanity
This is way to much to handle
I shouldn't have gone this far
You don't have a hold on me
Leave
And leave me my guitar
I'll sing away every thought
Of you
With every tune
Til the final note
You're gone
Until my mind pleads innocent
Tangled in the confines of sleep
As I dream
A contest entry
- give me your best! by breakdown-beatdown.
550 points, ended September 6, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Excellent!
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You did a great job expressing your emotions of pain and frustration in your love life. We all hold secrets deep inside, and it takes a very special person to be able to ever share it with. Great job, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty
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Very nice write, I like the way you wrapped it up. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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this was AMAZING it would play out so so well as a song i LOVE it! thank you so much for entering it really showed emotion and i could hear a tune in my head as i was reading it the second time through
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