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Insanity

Nobody cares about the way I feel
Nobody knows who I really am
I ache inside at this loneliness
I am fading away

Blank eyes follow my every move
I can't disguise my fear
I can't runaway from my own depression
Why can't I be free?

Quietly I tremble blade in hand
Darkness surrounds my existence
My clouded mind is so sick
My blade moves across my wrist so quick

Misery is mine
and I can't be free
I try
I run
I hide
But I can't me freed from my own mind

I wear shackles round my wrist and my feet
Locked by a key that is long gone away with my happiness
My chance for simple bliss has turned to emptiness
Promises broken by my own heart, death is my friend

I cant understand
Why my smiles and pigtails turned to hate and razor blades
My tears are like crimson beads falling
Thundering, staining my pale cheeks

Misery is mine

I can't be free
I try
I run
I hide
But I can't
                   I can't be freed
                                          From my own mind

                           From my insanity

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  • emogrl
    August 29, 2008

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    why can't we find that key???? im sorry that ur going thru this and trust me i rally know how you feel.....

  • unforgivenemo
    August 28, 2008

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    that is a really good poem. it explains how everone who deals with their problems like us, feels

  • x2o
    August 28, 2008

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    Amazing.

    This is probably my favorite one I've read yet. I can relate to this entirely, and the way you wrote this down captures the mood exactly.

    I'm new to the site, but if more people can write like you I'll stick around for a long time!

    Keep it up!

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