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Have You Ever?

Have you ever felt like $hit and then have to put on a smile?
Have you ever gotten hit and pretend like nothing happened?
Have you ever witness someone die and feel it was your fault?
Have you ever been in love with someone who didn't love you back?
Have you ever been abused or sexually abused and never told anyone because you are too scared?
Have you ever started a rumor about someone and then realized that it was about you?

Have you ever done any of these things?I know I have.

Have you?

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  • miss lyss-kiss
    January 12, 2009
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    i think we all have put on a smile wen timez ar ruff.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 27, 2008

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    This is pretty cool and thought provoking.
    It's terrible the way we treat each other sometimes. Lovely work here!




    Jeremy0826


  • MD Masroor
    October 22, 2008
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    Wow. Deep, strong, dark. You're one heck of a poet young lady. Keep it up!


  • AnonymousXO
    August 30, 2008
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    I have had to fake a smile a ton. I've never witnessed anyone die and am really sorry if you have.

    I think this poem would be better in left alignment, center dosent seem to fit here.
    I think the "I know I have" part would have more impact if it was like this
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    Have you ever done any of these things?

    I know I have
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    Nice write =]
    AnonymousXO