Quietude plays
Under the umbrella of
Inquisitive mind wandering the
Lanes, twisted into ropes of…
“Then, now and after”
Ecstatically writing memoirs of
Days in making history
Mesmerized by destiny
Emphatically playing rehearsed part in the
Master plan of Almighty
Oblivion to the future uncertainty
Rowing lifeboat gently
In the center of
Eternal peaceful memory land, I
Sleep wrapped in the warm blanket of quilted memories
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you know when i saw this i was thinking of that thing where people put memories in a quilt. this is kind of like that but better, mental quilting, keep it flowing
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SOOTHING! SO SOOTHING TO ME!!!!
With all of the days stress and grind, as the evening comes with its problems one just lies down in bed and let their sweet memories from long ago seep into their very souls to help them fall into their dreamland of sleep.

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WOW!!! You got some great lines in this one! Very vivid images, and touches one's heart deeply! Great job as always!
and love
Nyetta


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Whoa!
I enjoyed this verrry much! fav. line is: "Eternal peaceful memory Land" But I caught the first letters. And then the ending with "quilted memories" I let a long whoa.... out of me.
This is great!





