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The severing of parts

you thumb the jade cross
My grandmother left me when I was still nameless

you breathe, and release a deep sigh
and I know that I have been expelled as easily.

I remember when your kiss was a flame that lit me like a torch
when a simple whisper was lyrical

But I am trapt by these layers of frail skin that
dig as you like, you just can't crawl into.


Author notes

Option 4 -
torch
breathe
layers
cross
jade
lyrical
whisper

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  • City-of-Angels
    August 30, 2008

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    "But I am trapt by these layers of frail skin that
    dig as you like, you just can't crawl into."
    Nice last few lines. Good job with the word bank. Thanks for entering and good luck.