do you wish u could make time freeze?
to live the moment a little more
u think it will make life a breeze
forjust a little time before,
life leaves you with only memories?
you have my prayers and sympathies
you have friends and a family
this isnt my place of expertise
but remember now his spirit is free
and youll always have your memories
Author notes
Dedicated to the passing of Meroza's step dad.
Prayers should be remembered for Meroza and her family.
In a list
A contest entry
- Goodbye daddy, hope to see you in heaven by Meroza.
4500 points, ended September 11, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - RIP Grandpa... I still love you!!!! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended November 4, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very good. I like how you wrote it. Thanks for entering it in my contest. Keep up your amazing work!!!
Best of luck, and congrats on the honorable mention!
CrimsonViper (Midoriko) -
I red this poem out loud to my mother, after loats of crying we decided we would want to use this poem in the locals newspaper.
Do we have your aproval? And may you please IM me the name you want the credit to?
Thank you again for this amazing entery. -
This poem brings tears to my eyes, this is written with care and understanding.
I will keep in mind that his spirit is free and his sorrow or pain that he may have felt in his last moment are over.
Thank you for entering
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This poet is right. Memories never die and you will have your step dad in your heart forever.
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