The phone is shocking
no more knocking
the tic is tocking
the bed is clean.
This heart is breaking
I miss love making
no picture taking
what does this mean?
You dimiss me
never kiss me
kissing someone
but it ain't me
I'm so lonely
time goes slowly
why do this,
don't you miss me?
Author notes
A contest entry
- Anything you wish by thepoetssoul.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for this wonderful entry.
I like the rhythm and rhyme.
your sadness within hits deep
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Thanks, Tony
Yeah, I was sad when I wrote this, but hey, I'm not sad today, yessa!
I'm glad you liked the poem, and thanks for the roses. Bell, xx
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awww, this is sad. Best of luck to you. Love, Lane
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No problem
this was just a stupid little diddy, hehehe
Thanks for reading something from me.
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