Such intense feelings
as I feel your softness
brush gently against my skin;
stare, deep into your brown eyes
and slowly fall into sin.
Suggestive whispers of love,
two bodies in motion,
growing slowly in time.
Our bodies devoted
to each other, to our love.
Careless whispers,
two bodies in motion;
feel love grow slowly in time,
with our body's devotion.
Luscious lips pressed over mine
readying for our moment,
encounter divine.
Careless whispers, tender caresses,
make your manliness rise.
Soft moans, I feel you,
your love so deep.
No, not a dream,
for why not this moment keep?
You tense around me, I, around you;
our voices, simply get lost in time.
We go from firm, strong...
to...
Softness...
Release...
Oh, love of my life,
from this moment on,
you will be mine always
'til the end of time
copyright:
Tanya Campos-Gracia
Adding your comment:
Beautiful thoughts and imagery here, soft and subtle, very nice indeed! Line under the second verse 'Carelss' = 'careless' Be sure to double check all spelling, if your anything like me your thoughts are way ahead of your words, leading to the odd little typo 
I just feel there are so many different words out there, expressing it differently each time would improve on the imagery and creativity IMO 
I look forward to reading different themes from you, I am sure you have much talent left to show us 
