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Perfect!

I had waited for you for a long time.
Did you know I was there?
Could you here me?

When you came into my life,
It was perfect, you were perfect.

I had never felt this love before.
I never will again.

Your tiny hand, just the right size,
to grip my finger.
Blue, unfocused eyes.

Perfect!

You didn't cry.
How still you lay.
I had never loved before that day.
"One hour", I heard them say.

I smiled and smiled.
I rocked you gently.
So tiny.

I sang you a lullaby
As I touched your tiny feet.

I carried on singing,
Even as I felt your last heartbeat.

Untouched by the world you entered,
Untouched you should leave.
One moment of true love.

Perfect!

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  • Swan song gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    This was tender and pure and very very beautiful sob!


  • Toxic Stardust
    August 28, 2008

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    wow

    This is the saddest one I've read yet. I don't know what I would do if that happened to me. wow, that's all I got to say, wow. You really have some talent.
    Much Love and Keep Writing,
    -Alicia Lynn


    • lea76
      August 31, 2008
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      thank you very much for your comments.... much appreciated.