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Silent Night

Simmering candlelight flickers
In the arms of the falling night
Laying gently on the bed of time
Exhausting sprinkles of life
Tabefying moments playing the waiting game

Nargileh exhales bubbles of evening whispers
Intuitively flame burns in desires
Gullibly thinking of boxed point in time
Handwriting the story of the day
Testing the waters of a silent night, candle burns down.

Author notes

Just plain weird thinking of the life of a candle... don't know if it makes any sense for you or not

Note:
Tabefying - To cause to waste gradually, to emaciate.
Nargileh - An apparatus for smoking tobacco. It has a long flexible tube, and the smoke is drawn through water.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 2, 2008

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    i like it, kind of give romanticism to something most people over look. keep it flowing. you know i hope that sounded as good in my head as it does to you.