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Locked Satin Lips

Living in the moment
Obtrusive in time
Calmly she smiles
Keeping her secret
Embellished with love, locked inside in the
Depths of her whispering heart

Satisfied, her eyes shy
Away from ocean of blues
Titanic ship sails
In the midst of storm
Nesting her feelings reaching for the skies

Limber her mind bends
Inclined to listening whispers of her
Palpitating heart skipping beats
Silently she whispers through locked satin lips – “I love you”

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 1, 2008

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    with this comment i applaud and give you a standing one, for you wonderfully done poem, keep it flowing, my friend, keep it flowing