Dream deeply my darling angel so wise,
kiss my lips with your essence of love’s scent
Your touch window wiped my emerald eyes,
when I found a note with golden ends bent.
Precious jewels you bestow of nectar ripe,
soothing the spirit within this man’s sigh
A scribe of romantic love in each write,
pretty as roses where petals bloom high.
Fingertips mend broken beats off tones tune,
full length nails scratch each itch of failing love
So those crackled wings can feel clouds breath swoon,
resting calmly between breasts I dream of
Celtic songs ease the restless soul of me,
Wrapped in milky silk thighs of thick honey.
Author notes
~Sensual Sonnet~ Voodoo Love.
Background Inspired. By redcatjazzoflove.
Need Some Love
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This was a really alluring and sensual piece. I thought the opening line was perfect and really romantic. I also loved the lines "A scribe of romantic love in each write,/ pretty as roses where petals bloom high." Both of those lines had a very loving feel to them and the use of similie was brilliant. I thought the ending was clever and a lovely finish to a wonderful write. Great work x
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This is a lovely piece.
Best wishes in the contest
although you know I feel all your work is
gold
loving you always
Victorious
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Wow this is phenomenal and Sensual!
I love this very enchanting and alluring piece of poetic brilliance, Poet Laureate standard for sure. Poetic Graphics are brilliant, great use of descriptives and I loved the bit which goes:
"Celtic songs ease the restless soul of me,
Wrapped in milky silk thighs of thick honey"
What delightful and sensual terminolgy here!
The ambiance is fantastic and so rich and dreamy and very transcending too.
For me the font was lovely but not too easy to read, but the trade off was style so thats ok, I just ran my mouse over the text and then read it highlighted, which helped.
Main thing is the poem was fantastic and a realy pleasure to read and ponder on afterwards.
Love it, well done!
Love the page graphics also they really made this piece even better again!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Amazing ^_^
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A perfectly written verse of sheer beauty and passion. I love this! Just amazing! The background is very nice, accentuating the sonnet perfectly and sensuously. Great job!
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THIS IS GREAT I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!
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droppin in checkin ya out here Mushy i see you took care the love event very well here I really like the whole love set up here nice job
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scented love
is what you desire and this is beautifully penned, i concurr with all other comments, keep sharing all that you are, good luck in the contest
Linda
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my dearest you pen such beauty and passion within each line breathing a hummed melody of romance and sensuality in harmony. your wife my dear is a lucky lady to be the center of silent romantic getures and heated passions. deep intesity exudes in abandoned wonderment. awesome as always my dearest. much love and many blessings always xxxxx
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Intoxicating sensuality penned with romantic intensity. The title conjures up dark mysteries which the poem fulfills.
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You're Brilliant
Love the flow you have within each rhyme you pen Tim.
You are a great poet indeed, and I love your words.
Thanks for giving us readers your gift to view.
Me.
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Absolutely Stunning!!!
YOU ARE THE POET!!! Best of luck in this contest!!!
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EXCELLENT!
What a lovely piece you have written
here. It's great to see you back again.
I love the sensuality here mixed in with
this lovely background. Good luck to you
bro and take care!
Jeremy0826 -
TRUE POETIC WEAVER
IT IS A VERY SUITABLE NAME POETIC WEAVER, WHAT BEAUTIFUL SMOOTH AND MAGICAL WORDS YOU WEAVE INTO POETRY! -
"Fingertips mend broken beats off tones tune,
full length nails scratch each itch of failing love
So those crackled wings can feel clouds breath swoon,
resting calmly between breasts I dream of"
What is that beauty and those magic words, genius magnificent pearly strand of beautiful words, what a jewel of a piece
full length nails scatch each itch of failing love?
what wonderful imagery you pen here.
WOOOOOOOWWWWWW
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Nice sensual sonnet of love good luck
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Celtic song soothe my soul, romantic whispers of love! Softly spoken words of love...Great job! ~Sie Goodluck in yrou contest...Nice background as well.
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Excellent Piece
Once again you show-case your romantic side with some sensual words mixed with a sweet background. The poetic package draws the reader within each line, and captivates them throughout the poem. You
this one Dad, and thanks for sharing.
Much love, your son Timothy aka poeticpieces
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Nice Job Poeticweaver
As usual I take a peak at your poetry every once in awhile, and it always rocks within the cradle of the rhyme. This I'm sure is making someone's week, and what more inspiration can one get from a background so cool such as this. All the best in the contest. Looks like a winner to me.
Cradle2TheGrave
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not only your love is King but god damn you are a sensual erotic master its fucken sizzling and delicious hon it is so gold and to represent the fact that you have your King Trophy here to let the poetry world know who is in the building
good luck mushy woo its superb i love it
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