im.venting.im.venting.i.havent.written.in.forever.
andnowwheniwanttoihavenospacebar
why.must.life.be.so.cruel??
he's.online...but.no.word.from.him...
whymustlifebesocruel?
im.venting...im.venting...
if.no.one.can.read.this.i.do.not.care.
imventing.
just
venting.
i.miss.him.more.than.life.itself
and-want-to-see-his-smiling-face-again
is-that-so-much-to-ask?
imisshim
iwanthim
to
come
back.
i
want
you
back
do-you-hear-me?
can
you
hear
me
ssssscream?
Author notes
haha...yea..the-space-bar-and-ss-key-on-my-keyboard-are-busssted.-and-i-jusssts-had-to-write....this-is-not-a-serious-poem...just-something-i-sat-down-and-spit-out...so-dont-take-it-a-such
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you-didnt-have-to-read-it.
and-it-wass-written-for-me-and-only-me-so-piss-off
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lousy
just because you had to write--and i understand that--doesn't mean you have to torture us with a lousy poem and a verse that is CHOCK FULL of bad punctuation. type it up in wordpad or notepad. don't crap on the beauty that is poetry.
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