Flying dancncing along with the sky
tapping, laughing the constlations cry
tracing moving bringing out the night
blue darkness colliding with me
the moonlight shines on who i
could be
Stars brake away flying free
they take a ride they follow me
Glittering stars gather about
Immoratlity just drifting about
Black wings surround me
casading with the wind
dancing floating
its never going to end..
the worlds escape me and
bond with my skin ...
I am this moment in time..
A moment that will never end...
A contest entry
- Picture prompt tell me what you see! by Iridessa MoonFlower.
600 points, ended September 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 4 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Kiss by Moonlight and Starlight ♥ by Sunkissed xo.
1000 points, ended October 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did you think?
Comments
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What a lovely poem! I almost feel as if I am flying along with you.. your beautiful, powerful words raise my heart and soul up! I especially loved the line: "Glittering stars gather about/ Immoratlity just drifting about"
Overall, an amazing, inspiring write - well done, and thanks for entering the contest! Best of luck in it!
Love and Light
Katie
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You have a nice poem here, but it has a lot of grammatical errors in it. Thank you for entering the contest.
♥
whisper
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I really enjoyed this, however there was a few spelling mistakes. Overall I really like the imagery that you put in to this. The poem flowed magically. Thank you for entering in to my contest & good luck.
In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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Awww, this was so light and beautiful! It lifted me up and made me smile I haven't read such a joyful poem in a while.
I loved the whole idea of dancing along with the stars in the sky.
Such wonderful imagery and amazing use of metaphors -- incredible!
<3
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