Dick Rise
By: D Saul So Sexy
As I sit in the corner of my dick rise,
watching you,
talk that fuck me shit in silence.
Trying to get me to pay you attention,
we about to get it on,
but on my terms only.
I pull off my wife beater
and slide my watch off my wrist,
as I massage my cat licking lips.
I am walking to the shower scenery
undoing my Armani Change belt
as I already have in mind the sex
weps that will be inside your walls
as my dick calls you.
Lighst are dim,
I step in the glass shower,
and let the water run down
my face,
my chest,
my abs,
water dripping off
my real 12 inch dick.
I see you peeking,
pussy lips ready to creep,
the scent of unforgivable
is making your clit wiggle.
You finally make yourself seen
saying,Babe please “ Can I Get In”?
I grab your hand,
and pull you in while your in
your negligee.
And corner you into our shower
as the water rain falling,
I stare into your eyes,
asking you why you piss me off?
You give me that look that tampers
with my emotions and attemp to kiss me,
and I move my face back from you.
As the hurt surfaced your face,
i know i torn you becuase I
have never brought you a single day
of pain since I made you my woman.
I turn my back to you,
as you start embracing me,
I am actually smilling because I know
I am that dude who take care your ooh's.
You ask what you can do to make it up to me.
Then I turn you around
trace your face and asked you why babe
as I swallow your lips,
massaging your neck,
I am looking at the lies in your body
movement trying to feed me a guilt trip.
You're letting each fingertips of mine,
slide up under your straps,
and snatch them down ass they rip.
I take your hands,
and mine and we both play with your nipples,
as you push your tits together,
I suck and gently bite your nipples,
as I spin you around and kiss
down your back,
as your moaning Darius
whinning you love me
and your sorry.
And as I am smacking,
akissing those ass cheeks,
I take my palms,
and start circular motioning
your clit.
As I open your pretty
pussy palace up and put
my whole entire mouth over
it and give it one hard slurp,
as you grab my head,
I push your hands off my head and
I get up, and look you into
Your eyes,that bleeds i
really fucked up this time
and open the shower
door and left you
with a hard clit
and my dick rise.
© Darius C., All rights reserved
Author notes
Yeeeeeeeeeeeah ga lol, you women, ya boi is trained in making a woman
Obidiant when she want good sex. And yes ya boi did this for real you have
To be a good chick to get master dick a lot of boys to weak minded
But I know how to control mine. Don’t mean to get you all wet and horny ladies lmao .
Recalling the truth of this story as I remember her on her knees
Begging me while I blow my nicotine in her face ~ Mr. D Finest ~
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Comments
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You really know how to leave a girl hanging, Iove it, bro
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Good luck in the contest, it definitely made me hot. lol. This was great really a true fantasy
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come on now the "12" should be her punishment lol u just cant let that go to waste if i were her i would have been mad faf but sum women like a tease i love this though
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wow this is what it feels like
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oh really
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Oh my!
I LOVE THIS here, 'D' 
I mean the whole control thing, sexual tension is HOT and it's a major turn on
Naughty indeed, but oh so D-nice too
Gr8t imagary in this, I think you did very well!
-Ephiphany
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did i get your pulse racing ga if so i am suprised thanks yea it is hot when yawls asses want to be bad
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oh my.....i have no words this is some serious stuff....from beginning to end the words form images giving life to scenes created in the mind and enticing the body....this is whats up for real...now i need a cold shower.
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thanks ga
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your so bad boy lmao it isnt good for my eyes reading stuff like this i havent been this excited in a while and you really screwed us around with this one very cute good luck here
Ash.
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hey ga oh hell thanks
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Damn boi you wrong for that shit. lol loved it
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thanks sexy baby
i know right i felt bad but had to to do it
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My good god! *waves hand in front of my face* I need a serious cool down. That was f'in hawt! You sure do know how to leave a girl hangin though. It's all good ... no worries, I'll get even lol. This was very good. Loved it boo.
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thanks girly yea i was chuckling up writing it i knew it would be a torture
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you mutha F***er damn you are just about good as me gesh and you are so good at this to where you had us tramps really in to the read and your ass going to walk out you are a trip i see chocolate was probably like damn this is good though honey really good proud of you
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poetry wife ga you is so crazy thanks
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HOT
DAMN YOU TOOK ME THERE LOVE SIS WAS GOOD MAKE NO MISTAKE YOU WOULD HAVE GAVE ME THAT 12 INCH HARDCORE RISEN shhhhhhhhhh YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN I LOVE THE WAY YOU TEASE IT JUST MAKE IT MORE INTENSE WHEN YOU DO GET IT OR IS IT JUST ME
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damn that picture is so sexy and no its not just you its both of us it makes the sex like 10 million times more ooh i cant wait to ge your ass in the bedroom again in writing o ga
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YOU BETTA STOP WITH THAT FLIRTIN DON'T U WANT ME ON YOU LIKE THAT LOL THANKS FOR DA COMMENT ON THE PIC WHENEVER YOU READY TO FUCK MENTALLY YOU KNOW WHERE TO FIND ALWAYS WILLING TO GET MIND FUCK BY YOU LOL
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whooo damn lol this is hot
"I take my palm,
And start circular motioning
Your clit
As I open your pretty
Pussy palace up and put
My whole entire mouth over
It and give it one hard slurp" fucking getttin me excited lol good job
xoxo- christina
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ur fucken pretty i love your look
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awww thank you babe! <3 ur very hot urself
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Good write! How you going to leave a girl hangin though
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got you ga i wish i could have seen your cat lmao
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