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Our Moment of Truth

Lost in our complexity,
Imprisoned in schedules,
We overlook the moment
Like a snowflake in the storm.

We must race for survival.
None stop to smell the flowers.
Meditation is a joke
With the now as its punchline.

Our lives, love, no different;
We rush to find our meaning.
Too focused on the tunnel,
Unaware of those close by.

Life is choice; I choose to rest.
My decision, criticized.
I beg you, take the same route.
Come join me in the present.

Omit the past, the future;
Exist in this space just once.
Life goes on, so remember:
In this moment, I love you.

Author notes

With our hectic schedules and misplaced emphasis on the past and future, a romantic moment can easily be overlooked or put on the back burner when a new challenge arises.

The only truth in words exists when they are spoken, before time, experience, and whatever other poisons exist in our lives corrupt them.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    Yes..This is what the life is my friend..and you have depicted it so rightly and so much depth with..well done..and thanks for sharing it...


  • Terry Collett
    August 28, 2008
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    Good poem.

    Good poem with a theme so important.