I'm the most important
the start of the rainbow
and the first stripe
on the American flag
I'm the brightness
of the harvest moon
I'm present in the beauty
of the sunset
I'm the beauty of the sun
the yummy taste of sweet corn
and that a so lovable bear
Whinne the Pooh
I'm the duey grass in the morning
the algae in the fish tank
the leaves before autumn
and the sourness of a lime
I'm the softness of the sky
the rough waves of the ocean
and I show the pride of our country
I am lightning in the stormy sky
the end of the rainbow
and the prettiest pansy
Together we all color
the rainbow of words
Author notes
Option One Prompt four
No animals were harmed during the writing of this poem
A contest entry
- Life is about Options by Darkwell.
1050 points, ended September 1, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me your thoughts and/or views
Comments
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thank goodness that no animals were harmed during the writing of this poem! I was beginning to worry for poor winnie the pooh! hee-hee-hee
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wonderful!!
very decriptive, i could see all the colors reading this clearly and i like the way you made the colors speak for themselfs while not harming any animals in the writing of this. WTG Good luck in the contest
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Sweetie, you did an exceptional job! And I mean it from the middle of m heart. You tried something new, and I give you a 102%!!!
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i really like the way you did this! good job in the contest.
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