My dark moments fade,
when colors starts to shine,
it's such a beautiful display,
of the arrogance of light.
It faded together with the movements,
an appreciated ungraceful sways of lines,
form blue to red, green to yellow,
a very wonderful sight.
Dance and glimmer,
glimmer and dance,
let my soul do it,
and make me feel at rest.
Glowsticks of the night.
Author notes
hmm, a quickie...
A contest entry
- 10/40/30 quickie/pif! ***POINTS TO BE RAISED*** by Rizzie.
420 points, ended August 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
light, tell me...
Comments
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wonderful imagery
very well written the energy is so vivid
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wow this is good!!! why didn't you win a trophy. this is awesome!!! -slick99
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thanks
I just entered this yesterday night, and the contest is till under judging process...
and I really hope I could win this one...
thanks for the comment, thanks for boosting up my confidence on winning on this...
thanks!!!!
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