Obedience comes quite easily after awhile.
Do this...
Do that...
Inside my head I rebelled
If you let me live...
then you will die
It was a way of staying sane
The truth was different
you belong to me
you are my master
you die when I say so
you speak what I tell you to speak
you smile when I tell you to smile
It was only right to do so
At what point did I decide to be controlled forever?
probably when I lost control of myself...
when I realized every shameful thing
I did was being videoed
by the clouded deluded lies
of people minds
I wondered....
why didn't I refuse?
was death by suffocation so bad
that I was prepared to live like this
I believed I had no choice....
maybe I thought it was faith or something
There where no marks that
would say what happened
I bled inside but not outside...
I lived in darkness to always face the unknown
.....I'm lucky.I'm alive...I did what I was told....
A contest entry
- Day of Silence: April 17th, 2009 by Cyanide Dreams.
900 points, ended April 17, 9 entries
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Comments
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Great job on this piece. I enjoyed this, and it really is very emotional. I kinda wanted to shed a tear, but eh. I enjoyed this read and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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SPEECHLESS
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I really liked this poem, especially how you ended it. Very nice and insightful. =)
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i liked it
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I like it. ._. I'm not very good at pointing things out and stuff, I just liked the whole thing allot. :} lol I thought it was awesome.
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sis sometimes i worry about you and sometimes my worring is right
SIS ARE YOU OKAY??????????????????????????????????????
okay seriously the poems great and fantastic but
wat the heck are you depressed about that is if you want to tell me
if you don't then thats cool to
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