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Left me

Everything was lost to me
When I found out she had gone
She had gone forever
Left me all alone
I never had thought
Our relationship would ever end
But it did
When she was hit
By the wicked disease
She was gone,in days
After she found out
What was wrong
She was an angel sent from above
Kind to everyone,
........and loving
She was like my best friend
But she had to go
One day
Now she is back
Back where she came from
Heaven

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  • Toxic Stardust
    August 28, 2008

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    this is good. It could've been a bit more emotional, but it was still good.
    Much Love and Keep Writing,
    -Alicia Lynn


  • Slick99
    August 28, 2008

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    this is really sad pop123... but it's nice and touching... best of luck in the contest!!! -slick99