You deserve better, is all I hear from you.
I don't want better, for there is nothing as such.
I replace the pain, I replace the tears.
With memories that I'll always hold inside.
I'll do anything, for a place in your heart.
I'll give up everything, just to be with you.
I'll hold on to you, until my last breath.
If it's my fate, then forever I shall wait.
I don't want better.
I want only you.
<3
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wow .... now this is what I call true love .... this is a very honest write from an honest lover ..... in each line of the poem I see loyalty towards the person whom you love .... very beautiful write ... I LOVED IT !!! -
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Awww thank you so much!!
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Wow!! There is so much love here. And longing. I would kill to have such a write written for me. AMAZING!
Warmest,
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Thenkew so much!
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quintessence of feelings
I replace the pain, I replace the tears.
With memories that I'll always hold inside......well expressed with quintessence of feelings
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Thank you ^_^
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A lovely piece, even if filled with a little pain, it is still beautiful that in the end they are all you want. Best to you
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Thenkoo for the sweet comment ^_^
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omg, this is awesome
can i have permission to send it to my ex?
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Sure thing. No problemo
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I really don't know what got into me. I typed this in around 3-4 minutes I guess :S
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good...
i could feel the pain in this pome .. the emotion was very raw.. i liked the way you worded things and the idea that is represented from this... i like the idea of a painful love and you brought that to life very well... i enjoyed it...
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