My hand was shaking as the rose hit the floor.
You cried as you saw me then i closed the door.
You meant the world to me,what did i mean to you.
Were things so wrong,tell me what did i do.
Does he know how to make the world fade in your head.
Does he make you smile on days that you wish you were dead.
I did.
I'm walking to the car,can't shake what i just saw.
My chest is barely moving,still in shock of it all.
Where do we go from here,whats around the bend.
If i had my way tonight i would make my world end.
I drop to my knees and rest my head on my hand.
I'm swimming in tears,and i just cant understand.
I pull the thing from my pocket,was gonna give it to you tonight.
Was gonna slip it on your finger,now that dreams out of site.
Does he know about the things you hide inside of your heart.
Does he know how to glue it back together when it falls apart.
I did.
A contest entry
- Awesomely Sad Poems by Toxic Stardust.
475 points, ended September 1, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow.... well done!!!
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This is really good
Good luck in the contest!
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wow
Dude, I love this! It is so awesomely sad! This is exactly what I was looking for. I'm not saying that you're gonna win 'cuz I haven't read all of the others yet, but it's a possibility.
Much Love and Keep Writing,
-Alicia Lynn
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