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The Magic Of A Kiss

What is it about a kiss
that invigorates the heart
while filling the soul with bliss?

The tenderness of its touch
eludes to intimacy,
a closeness we crave so much.

It is how we convey love,
igniting the desires
and passions poets speak of.

As a sexual embrace
it transforms reality,
bending the fabric of space.

Healing hurts with its magic
it makes small pains go away
and bigger ones less tragic.

A sensual soft caress
that physically imbues
feelings you cannot express.

A kiss is a promise made,
a show of sentiment and
an emotional band-aid.

A personal connection
moist lips pressed against hot flesh,
in a pledge of affection.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 17, 2008

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    You have given the act of kissing a whole new name...a promise, a band-aid, sensual,tenderness and a pledge of affection...Beautifully written my friend! and thank you kindly for sharing


  • Ellis gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    This is terrific

    This describes a kiss
    In more ways than I could.
    Much of this I would miss,
    But you have understood!


  • nature mithya
    September 14, 2008

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    Lovely long kiss.

    Did I know the various pros and cons of the act?
    Hard to say in truth for a kiss is just a kiss flamed in love not a peck.
    Lol
    and if your lungs cant hold out see the crush break out in long breaths.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    What a wonderful emotional nterpretations of the kiss iare made with a beautiful poetry...thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Bravo,

    I really like this write poet, how true your words ring!
    Thanks for sharing, and I wish you all the best within the contest!

    Peace, Timothy


  • nevadapoet
    September 1, 2008

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    Touche'...very nicely done. A great write with great flow and perfect images. Thanks for the entry and best of luck.
    Nevadapoet


  • 2lullabyhaven
    August 28, 2008

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    Sweet kisses melt the heart for sure lol your poem captured it all in print lol and good luck


  • Rovingone gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    A kiss is a promise made,
    a show of sentiment and
    an emotional band-aid.

    That's true. Kisses always make things better. Good depiction of an old favorite American pasttime.

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