One boy
Five girls
Emily and Betty best friends forever
Lisa and Helen never got along
Sarah the social outcast.
Jolie managed to steal each heart
Emily was the first, they met over Pizza
Sarah was next; he met her crying by the steps
Lisa followed shortly with her with her love for ‘Linkin Park’
Helen was his favorite cheerleader
And Betty was a perfect ten… need I say more?
Jolie loved each one and but could not let go.
Emily and Betty never kept secrets but for some strange reason,
Jolie became a well-kept secret.
Lisa and Helen are beautiful arrogant girls
Who never believed they would date the same boy.
Sarah could not understand what Jolie liked about her
And she did not have any friends to talk to.
One day Jolie decided to end each relationship
He could not start lying to them anymore.
Emily swallowed 20 pills and downed a bottle of scotch;
Her parents were out on a romantic dinner
Sarah carved Jolie’s name into her wrist, and slashed
Her wrists several times, the pain blacked her out.
Betty filled her bath tub and took a never ending bubble bath,
Her parents broke open the door and found their dead daughter.
Lisa drove her car over a cliff on her way to the hospital,
Her mom had a severe heart attack and almost died. She wished she did.
Helen killed the baby inside her with a coat hanger
And she bled to death.
One boy
Five deaths.
Author notes
option 15
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wow very sad and upsetting but Great write,
It was amazing, The ending just Makes the poem
Keep the pen going,
And best luck in the contest and thanks for entering!
Tash.
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Thank you so much
xxx
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oh, this is a chilling write ... very sad and powerful
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thank you
xx
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This is a sad tale....
A horrid tale indeed...
But very good!!!
Thank you for entering my contest!!!
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thank you!
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Fine fine fine. That was really beautiful I enjoyed reading the "whole" piece but on quick commenting I couldn't see it ending. It's really cruel. Dark and horrific the line:
"Sarah carved Julies name in her wrist" it was a bit harsh but I liked it. Thanx for entering and Good Luck. -
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wait.. really you can't see the end because I can see it clearly
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Wow such a cruel poem. I can't say that I liked it. However, it was well written and a good write. However, I felt so much pity for these girls.
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ok thank you xx
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This was so sad! I still thought it was amazing though! Thanks for entering!
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thank you!
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Morbid... lol But its good I love the flow of the poem and the imagery.. Five girls... *thinks to himself* Ummm Sorry oh yeah poetry. The poem was good like a i said and i thought it was great
later
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looool hehe yes very morbid but thank you very much doe! xx
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they shoulda watched John Tucker must die and maybe they coulda survived
this is chilling and i seen this happen except for the death part like a couple of times at school. no friends should end over a guy but i lost a friend that way too so i totally understand. WTG good luck in the contest and thanx for not harming any animals 
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looool@ the john tucker thing loool but thank you!! and i wud never hurt animals loool xoxo
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