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Moonlight


Chased by ferocious wolves,
In a never ending forest,
Blood red clouds above,
I run, with all my strength...

Trapped in the midst,
Surrounded by death,
I close my eyes and pray,
For the inevitbale pain to vanish...

The clouds disappear,
The howling fades away,
Moonlight falling on me,
The surrounding so serene...

Waiting for us to become one,
Starting to despise daylight,
Never want it to come,
You are my moonlight...

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  • Kram
    August 31, 2008

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    well done

    I close my eyes and pray,
    For the inevitbale pain to vanish........ its foolish to close the eyes while running ...but faith , deep faith only allows it ,,its fine writing


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    August 30, 2008
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    dude, sweet imagery ^^


    • floofy
      August 30, 2008
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      Thenkew
      I screwed up in the end :S
      All so messed up >_<