the days a fit thought and reason
a simple life is such a season
the excitment no need, feelings are the greed
now is such the living seed
the mind resources are ones lifes desire
there are no needs to discover fire
death is meanless and full of basis
its not ignorent or weak to live
its just so soft and... evolved
Author notes
this is an expression to the basis of evolution
toda raba chaver, mazel tov with your contest
A contest entry
- Cave Men by Tamera.
600 points, ended September 11, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering yes I do believe we have gotten soft as we have evolved. Bias and greed are challenges we can still work to overcome. Maybe someday we will evolve to that. We can always hope!
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest, I will comment fully on each entry at the end of the contest.
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