They were working their wings with great joy, however, and they circled high, one following the other, metallic and feather-light.
They circled on and on, weaving ever-evolving patterns in the sky, circling now closer overhead so you could see each one of them tilting the beak sideways listening to the wing-beats of the others, adjusting the speed and the direction of the flight with subtle paddling variations of the wings to merge seamlessly with the whole.
They circled on and on and away, taking their ecstasy to levels beyond concepts, theories and logic.
They turned into specks of pure delight in the grey evening sky and, with the light of the heady regions playing on their feathers, became invisible flickers of sublime nothingness, dissolving from memory. They wheeled back into view yet again, drawing strands of some invisible filament from a drifting cloud.
The sun was behind a big bank of rain-clouds in the west. The whole line of the horizon west seemed to have caught fire and the clouds were billowing up like black smoke from a massive conflagration. They trundled east like a herd of wild elephants conquering a valley.
A sudden squall disturbed the trees, exciting cuckoos, sparrows and crows out of their perches. They flew from branch to unsure branch, but only the crows cawed. The doves were still circling high in the sky, wheeling in and out of the east-bound rain-clouds.
They wheeled with the high-altitude winds, sometimes the wind blowing them off their course, but each time the faltering happened, they dipped or climbed together to navigate the choppy ether, effortlessly weaving newer formations in which the wind too joined to make the whole.
The clouds galloping east would invade the whole sky: they rolled forward, the breakers curling in with the onward thrust of the massive clouds from behind. The wind among the trees had fallen silent. The whole earth seemed to freeze with the expectation of the first drops of the downpour as the clouds passed overhead, but it did not rain.
The clouds seemed to be holding back, they did not allow the myriad particles of vapour packing them with immeasurable power to condense and fall. They held back and rolled on and on as though they had to reach somewhere; they were so fixed on something. They were so vulnerable, but there was volatile strength in their vulnerability.
They rolled on and on and the light began to fall, growing dimmer by the second, until it seemed night and heavy shadows would embrace the sky and the earth...
And then there was light and revelation.
It had neither shape nor dimension; it was the flowering of a flower of thousand petals slowly blooming, petal after petal unfolding brilliance and fragrance, overflowing. The clouds were lifting their blanket in the west and the sun was coming out and now shining in the full glory of joyous surprises.
It was immeasurable and fathomless as the void of the heavens; and the doves were now circling closer and were not of this world.
They descended metallic and feather-light, the radiant violet of the rain-clouds behind them, their beaks soft and glistening as rose buds. They came swinging down on still wings, bobbing up in smooth arcs at touchdown and flapping their wings twice or thrice to gain sure-footed perch on the old rooftop.
They perched in a row at the very top of the roof where the tiles folded pyramid-shape and they were all facing east and crooning. They perched transmuted on the rooftop and they were all gazing happily at a glorious rainbow straddling the eastern sky, all seven colours sparkling.
It was their work; the entire sweep of the rainbow was their work.
The cuckoos began to sing and it was raining rainbows somewhere in the east.
Author notes
Our misery comes from fragmenting emotions--fear, hate, dislike, jealousy, suspicion, insecurity, greed, selfishness. Emotions that fragment us from the whole and do not allow us to see the whole. We are so blindly immersed in ourselves, our individual egos, that we fail to see and take pride in our collective ego.
We can build rainbows each day of our lives--at home, at play and at work--if we can be like these doves, totally unselfconscious and free of everything. When that happens, only the ecstasy of BEING can exist, the ecstasy of being together, being one with the whole. Then will a thousand rainbows bloom.
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amazing piece i absolutely loved piece and how you spent a time describing doves and it just put me in aww what words you use and how i could see this as a painting so vividly in my brain. great and amazing job well done


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you flatter me dear friend yet how i could not describe what experiencing it was watching the doves fly bringing the rainbow...
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