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the seven deadly sins.

in a time of deep sleep.
i left to another world.
to see problems presented.
and the mistakes that caused them.

halos float a top silver souls.
and the decayed ones. with devil horns.
all waiting in a line.
to hear their final resting place.

mine. shrivelled and decayed.
but i tried so hard.
i thought i did so well.
i take my spot at the dock.
and the lord begins to view my crimes.

lust.

but that is all a part of puberty.
isn't it natural to love someone that way?
GUILTY.

gluttony.

but i had food put in front of me.
i was always told to eat what i was given.
GUILTY.

greed.

but i was trying to make a living.
to stay warm and off the streets.
GUILTY.

sloth.

but i had jetlag.
i was out of time and tired.
GUILTY.

wrath.

but he teased me and called me emo.
it got just a little under my skin.
GULITY.

envy

but she had the one i loved.
she took him far away forever.
GUILTY.

pride

but i got an A in maths.
after working so hard for it.
GUILTY.

so this is what i have become.
while trying so hard to be good.
i am now just simply another sinner.
damned to smell sulphur for eternity.


Author notes

well. in my opinion its kind of hard not to commit the seven deadly sins. even though i have tried. i had already committed them by the time i was three.

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  • Ken-Maverick
    September 22, 2008

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    Very honest indeed
    It's not always easy to be this truthful
    Guilty in alot of things hey, lol
    Much enjoyed
    Thanks for your entry
    Ken

  • Old Spider
    August 28, 2008

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    Can't be truer.

    One might as well relish in the damn things and be done with it... well, that is if one actually cares about them anyway.