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~walking home~

I walk home
In that sunburnt sky
On a hot summer day
When evening was near
And leaves are hushed
Yet the stream still flows
Like a long winding road
And my soul is abreast
In search that one destiny
Mine fate that was never told
And I walk home
In that subtle mood
Like tomorrow would bring me
That wish and dream…
And then I knew
I’d still walk the distance

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  • My Solitude
    August 29, 2008

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    Wow, Ritz, this is one elegant piece... laden with deep meaning indeed. It makes me think, really! Of dreams and wishes that we bank upon tomorrow to bring along... I can read this again and again... U've put it really well~ "I'd still walk the distance" Love it to bits Ritz... U're massive in this stuff!